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Hello! As schedule dies down a little, I am really trying to get a better grasp on playing Hyungwon as my main. I am completely new to the MONSTA X fandom and I am learning slowly as I play him. I should have done more research before putting him out there, but I got excited and just threw him out there. Currently, his voice is a little all over the place and I'm still trying to find the right balance of everything. You can leave a comment/concern/crit/anything on everything, but I am specifically looking for: ➝ Constructive crit on my writing: English isn't my first language, so I would appreciate it if I could get a little feedback on how it is. What can I improve on? What is confusing? What should I look into? ➝ How Hyungwon is as a muse: If you are a familiar with MONSTA X, please tell me how you think my muse is in comparison to the real. I have been playing him based on what I have noticed and what my interpretation is of his personality. If you think I'm off track, please let me know! ➝ Dynamics between friends & members: This is specifically towards his bandmates and the people who know Hyungwon in real life. How do you think their dynamic should be? What can I change? ➝ Any information on MONSTA X in general will also be appreciated! Comments are screened and anonymous is enabled. Thank you for being patient with us and I hope you continue to play with him :)